I’d like to see the last two sentences…
“Preliminary analysis indicates that the market value of Bitcoins is already approaching parity with the energy needed to generate them. The developers expect that this will result in a stable-with-respect-to-energy currency outside the reach of any government.”
Changed to something like this…
“Analysis of power usage indicates that the current market value of Bitcoins is at or above the energy needed to generate them. This suggests a stable community with an increasing demand for usage. The community is hopeful the currency will remain outside the reach of any government.”
To represent the community as a whole, it probably won’t resemble anything you started with. As you average in everyone’s opinion.
I’m for this suggestion as well!